Hurray
I absolutely hate trailers but this one was just fantastic. It really just covered everything that the show is about and if this was my first time watching it without seeing the previously the episodes, I would of really wanted to go and watch it to find out what happens. Good work.
fantastic. Glad it was effective. Thanks for the review.
really good
I also enjoyed the ones before but need nudity for the goddess of love
More boobs
if you want this to make it on TV you got to show more boobs on your shows!! trust me, they'll buy into it.
Great show i thought this was Adult swim material.
It looks like a real show
If your piloting to Adult swim. Thats it. I hope thats what you are going for, because thats it. Its too vulgar (based on network standards, not mine) for fox and NBC and then, as well as not animated witht he quality they expect. The animation part also goes for the movie channels like Cinemax and them. Adult Swim though, shoe in.
I like it and hope it works out for you cause I love this series you got going.
Adult Swim is where we want it. =)
Can Take It or Leave It
After going back to view the first version after seeing this one, I have to say that either version will probably be acceptable. If you've ever watched DVD extras for animated shows that included pitch footage, this is really about on par. I just don't get any goosebumps from one version as opposed to the other, so really I have 2 suggestions for making your choice, assuming there isn't enough feedback here on NG:
1. Go with what you like best.
2. Get a couple of suckers together to be a test audience. Show them the versions and watch their physical reactions, as in eye width and movement of edges of the lips to see what they find most interesting.. then make sure you don't screw up the parts they react to the most.
Hope this helps some, and good luck with your pitch!
Awesome idea, the results of this Newgrounds test audience has been awesome, but I agree there are subconscious reactions that sometimes people aren't even aware of. I think I'm going to cut one more version and give it the IRL test. thanks =)