Reviews for Olympus Burger Trailer V2

[zen-taro]

Very good

I think this will make a good show, good animation, funny plot, but you could use a prolouge to explain why the Olympians are working there. I mean the gods just don't work at a fast food joint for no reason, and if you add other gods I think you should add Ares the god of war as a bully, Artemis as a spunky happy-go-lucky girl, Athena as a mature brainiac and better manager than Craig, Hera as the cottling mother figure, Kratos as the bad ass punk, Helios as a gay, and Eris as a prankster bad girl.

[hlfnglndmn]

i want an olympus burger xD

haha it was great dude really does look like a t.v series can't wait to see it on television

Sound-O-Vision responds:

me either! =D

[Marushiru]

I <3 Zeus :P

Good stuff, I'll try and get around to watching the pilot.

Hope it goes well for ya!

MARUSHIRU :P

Sound-O-Vision responds:

try harder! Thanks for the reviews, Marushiru!

[Ducktapegirl]

good, but...

A little rough around the edges. The opening explanation was a bit borring and just a little bit confusing. You picked some of the best scenes out of the pilot episode to represent each character. I think with the right persistance, you could make Adult swim on Cartoon network.

Good luck!

Sound-O-Vision responds:

I'll be working on a new cut, sounds like the opening text is where we need the most work. Thanks for the review.

[Mtypenguim]

Great

Review:
You took my advice and spiced up the text :)! this was much better, but i guess the quality is low because you converted it to an AIF to make it look tv like. That has so pros and cons, but mostly pros so im just gonna leave it at that.

I couldnt think of one scene that should of been left out, put in.

Once again, you reached your goal of having a tv feeling

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Sound-O-Vision responds:

Awesome. Thanks for the stats!