Gah! 2 months late on reviewing, sorry!
Sorry, I just noticed I got your message. But I noticed at a good time because it happened to catch me when I was writing, so I'm in the mood for a visual piece and writing a story. Hope you're ready for a long review.
It made me think of traveling going to place to place.
0:00-1:10
The beginning felt like pure darkness with me stumbling around, unsure of myself. A little lost and just emerging.
1:11-3:00
Then has I got out I found myself and a bleak empty place. Not dark, just empty. And just starting to understand the world around me. Just walking endlessly, few things scattered in-between. Like a desert but cold and lifeless.
3:01-3:50
Then back into darkness almost like a cave, getting lost a little but seeing a soft light at the other side.
3:51-4:59
Then I emerge to something beautiful. A forest. A quiet forest but beautiful nonetheless. With curious eyes of animals looking at me, I start running through the forest happily, feeling free and feeling the wind against my face.
5:00-6:30
Then I emerge from the forest to see a busy city in the distance, bright and bustling. I approach cautiously out of the forest, walking a slowly to the outskirts of the city, confused by the technology. It seems scary and exciting. I grow curious and enter the city.
6:31-8:10
At first I'm wary of the technology and don't understand. Then I accept it and get accustomed to city life, living there. Walking through the streets and stores, mastering the devices. Its great, and I'm happy. Then it starts going down, like a cataclysm. Like a war.
8:11-12:00
The war got bad, there's nothing left. I'm standing in a vast empty field, alone, scared, confused. I find my way back to the city. Everything broken, lights flashing from broken billboards and streetlamps, collapsed buildings, the technology all broken and useless. I wander aimlessly throughout the city, meeting no one, all alone. Until I reach the outskirts again.
12:01-15:00
I'm back in the forest, it looks dead and lifeless. The trees thin and black, the canopy a thin layer of dead branches. As I walk I see bones from corpses around the floor, it's like a nightmare, turning pleasant memories into to something dark and twisted. I eventually find my way back to the cave.
15:01-16:18
I walk through the cave- staggering along, tired and numb to the world. I don't make it out of the cave, I decide to stay there. It's dark and calm and I don't want to go outside, scared to see messed up world. Then I close my eyes and sleep, never to awaken.
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It was an excellent song, you could really sense the emotion in it and could tell it was deep and had meaning. It's a little too dark for me to listen to casually. But a great song nevertheless. A great song for writing exercises, it really makes your mind paint a picture. I'll have to check out some of your other stuff, and if there's any other song you want me to review or visualize just send me a message. I'll be happy to listen to it :D