Reviews for Exile Preliminary Rem

[itsbit]

ive seen it before

i know your drawing your story from a bunch of sci fi stuff and fantasy stuff but see thats the problem; then your just rehashing a bunch of ideas a lot of people have seen before. Im not saying its bad; theres obviously a lot of effort that went into making this. Im just saying when you make something like this sometimes its good to step back, breathe, leave it alone for weeks then review, have your friends review, and make sure that your original ideas get translated at its best onto the movie.

[Zertiof]

ummm

this kinda...

sucks ass

[TheManofSteal13]

Stylish

I like the way the menu is set up and the music selection was really great. You also got some good effects there too. The animation isn't bad, just needs alittle work and the voices needs to play alittle in character. Other than that, its all good.

Storywise, it looks like a great start. Its would be really great if the plot line pick up sometime later in the series. Suspense is alittle weak,avoid cliché whenever possible. Don't worry though,there's always room for improvement.

[TheSonicKid101]

Fable: The Lost Chapters(long review)

i'm really sorry, but hell this look just like that game(well in part one and 2)
first of, in fable the lost chapters, you are a boy who yes helps his dad and all that(same) and saw his parents die in front of his eyes(more same) and was taken in by the heroes' guild (more same but just the name is different) and then his first weapon given is a dam stick(EXADCTLY THE SAME)! and he has a friend he trains with till he grews up(same excepts its a girl and thats it) and all disctricts on this planet is seperated,AND heroes(royal guards) can have quests too.and the only different are is what happens AFTER the first part and there are buidlings, flying cars, a king, ect.

and one more thing, this is very confusing, you're buildings, cafeteria, elevators, even the dam food are like regular today, but your weapons and armor are dam swords and steel armor which is like 1400s? and then the dam flying cars which is like what time 2300????? you mixed dam time together and make it confusing, and ok, yes the fighting is a bit good, but could be better, i mean look up Sonic:Nazo Unleashed, the fighting in that is wayyy much better and yet he has less ratings than your stupid thing

RiverJordan responds:

I've never played Fable. any of them.

Nobody complained when cloud used a sword in advent children even though everyone was shooting at him, and final fantasty is choc full of flying ships and sword fights, so calm down.

[lordofudead]

on its way

i know some animations worse this this have got better marks but...

you animation is very well done, the story has kinda been done to death unfortunatly.

the sound was bad and varied from time to time in quality. for a serious movie i almost laughed at your voice made sound effects for the hover bikes. your on your way. i think you have great potential but you should pick an original story.

my personal favourite animation on this website is XIN session 18. good story, fine sound quality, good animation. take some insperation from them