A little too minimalistic
It sounds cool when there's a lot going on, but you should try to have some ambiances in there. It feels much too empty a little too often. You're getting there, though.
Reviews for "Chaos - Voice Mail"
tp-boy responds:
Thanks for the review mate, I thought the exact same thing at the start of the song but I wasn't exactly sure what to do with it, I'll keep trying though!
I agree with ChillyChal, that this song needs more oomph. I do like dubstep however, so I am a tad more open. But (no offence) you sort of missed the mark here. I was expecting a heck lot more bass, and the fact that it was very quiet did not help. It was unique and original (as far as that goes with dubstep), but very quiet and repetitive. I would definitely put some more in there, boost volume, and make some more background noise. Overall, this is an okay piece, but not something I really enjoyed listening to.
3.5/5
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Keep trying though. You have the hang of how to mix things, but you need to put more things together at once. Remember: There is no such thing as being too cluttered in dubstep.
I remember when my dubstep tracks sounded like that, I think you should use NI Massive and get some bass patches or make your own and this should help the bass problem if you use it right.
It was alright. I'm not a huge fan of dubstep to begin with, so I'm pretty picky.
I was expecting a sick drop when she said, "Leave your message after the tone." Your song is pretty decent, it just needs a little more oomph, in my opinion.
Um...look, this is alright...but it's pretty empty most of the time.
the drops are boring. The synth at 2:05 was pretty cool, but that's about the best it got.
Add more transitioning tools like cymbols, sweeping atmosphere sounds, you get the gist.
Listen to more dubstep tracks, because it seems you need to fill so many frequencies, have so much more variation of sound, and much more engaging transitions.