cool
you need a pop filter though!
Reviews for "I Will Not Fall"
Wolftacular responds:
=( I do know what you're talking about! I'm pretty bad at mixing, really XD And I was really dumbfounded as to why there was popping since the audio signal never went above 0db, and none of the tracks went above 4 db. I might try to fix it again some other time! Thanks a bunch for the feedback!!! I really appreciate it! =D
The mic
You've probably already heard this, but you need a better mic. But the song is very nice.
Wolftacular responds:
My mic sucks XD Thanks!! =D
Nice. I like the mellow.
Really liked how it was fairly mellow. Unlike many others in a world of metal and overbearing bass. Yeah, you do need a better mic, but it isn't something that should drop the score/rating...at least too much. Some people aren't fortunate enough to have really nice professional mics.
Was very well done, especially the first part, the quieter bit, with the piano/keyboard, but I think the transition could have been a bit better. I don't know. It seemed a bit...hmm...not natural/flowing? Maybe it's just me.
Great overall, and nice to see this kind of music in this day and age.
5/5 9/10 I'm gonna be nice and round up the /5 score. ;)
Wolftacular responds:
I'll have to admit I struggled a bit with the transition. Hearing it now, I think the biggest mistake was making the hollow space so long. So thanks a lot for the feedback!!
Thanks for the kind comment and score!! =D
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You got a good a voice. The instrumental in this song is actually quite great. Some parts of the vocals don't exactly "fit."
"Is this retreat
the only choice there is left for me?"
and
"And yet I know it's all my fault for walking
Barefoot in a field of glass but...
I will not fall"
sound a bit out of place. The rhythm is slightly weird in these areas and not exactly comfortable to hear. Other than that there are few problems with this piece. keep working at it.
Wolftacular responds:
Well, I can see why you don't like the second line. It really contradicts previous rhythm and stuff. But the "Is this retreat.." has the same melody and rhythm as the previous lines, so idk what's wrong with that one :(
Thanks a lot for the feedback!! =D