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Very nicely done, you are very talented and this sounds amazing! i could definitely see this being a hit, keep it up
Reviews for "I Will Not Fall"
Wolftacular responds:
Really?!? That is flattering!! Thanks a lot!! =D
cool
you need a pop filter though!
Wolftacular responds:
=( I do know what you're talking about! I'm pretty bad at mixing, really XD And I was really dumbfounded as to why there was popping since the audio signal never went above 0db, and none of the tracks went above 4 db. I might try to fix it again some other time! Thanks a bunch for the feedback!!! I really appreciate it! =D
Very good
However there are a few rough spots with the recording, in the second line when you say "pushing" there's some weird noise in the "pu" syllable, and I can hear you breathing in the "I" of the first "Well I will not fall". There are some more minor problems but overall it's pretty good.
Wolftacular responds:
Yes, and thank you for pointing them out, sir! Unfortunately, I lack a LOT of recording, editing, mastering; studio experience. I haven't gotten around to going to an actual studio and my equipment is pretty bad! And, I'm bad at recording myself XD I'll try to fix them! Thank you for the feedback!! =D
Nice. I like the mellow.
Really liked how it was fairly mellow. Unlike many others in a world of metal and overbearing bass. Yeah, you do need a better mic, but it isn't something that should drop the score/rating...at least too much. Some people aren't fortunate enough to have really nice professional mics.
Was very well done, especially the first part, the quieter bit, with the piano/keyboard, but I think the transition could have been a bit better. I don't know. It seemed a bit...hmm...not natural/flowing? Maybe it's just me.
Great overall, and nice to see this kind of music in this day and age.
5/5 9/10 I'm gonna be nice and round up the /5 score. ;)
Wolftacular responds:
I'll have to admit I struggled a bit with the transition. Hearing it now, I think the biggest mistake was making the hollow space so long. So thanks a lot for the feedback!!
Thanks for the kind comment and score!! =D
It's good.
It's massively impressive, however I think it can be better.
First minute is great
Second minute is great
Fifth minute is great
From 2:30 things get same-y and remain that way til 4 mins. I would recommend doing something else with that minute and a half. There's this thing in literature (most media) where showing too much of the same lessens the impact, and I think it's that minute and a half.
Another suggestion, but this is only personal preference, is to play around a bit more with that guitar starting at 2:28; it's a great sound but there can be more done with it.
You could even use that bit from 4:00 - 4:50 as a kind of chorus, transpose it to the 3 minute mark just to break things up a bit; a mild climax which comes back down to the guitar again and a few more verses. Playing around with the drums a bit would also help.
I was thinking of Placebo's 20 Years which gets away with it because it keeps the listener in suspense with promises of an ever building climax; then he breaks you down with orgasm denial... *cough*
Meh, I'm trying to be helpful here but failing. I really like the song.
Wolftacular responds:
Right now I consider the song to be finished :( But I have to say your feedback sounds very tempting to try. I rearranged a few things in the music sheet like you hinted and I do like it. Maybe, if I ever have to re-record it for an album or anything, I'll consider rearranging stuff!
Thanks a bunch for the feedback!! =D