hhhmmmm
the animation is fantastic but it laks humour but it depends on what your aiming for in this cartoon
Reviews for "2 - The Story of Khale"
hmmm
it gets a medium. good animation, but no really good humor. keep it going though. it needs a seqeul that could be funny as hell. school scenarios are always funny. good art!
LeafWorthy responds:
Why does something have to be funny to be appreciated? I think that's what comedy series are for...
Underwhelming
I don't know what to say, I just really didn't enjoy this piece.
The character designs were very good, but the rest of it didn't do anything for me.
I didn't find the writing to be at all interesting. They get up, fight, and go to school If I don't care about what I'm watching, it could be a really good piece of animation and I wont enjoy it.
So, on the basis of the narrative, I think that this piece is a 4.
it was okay
wasent the best thing ive ever seen 5/5
Shame about the characters...
...when the artwork is so beautiful. In the first episode, you created a vibrant, beautiful forest world, but even then I thought the main character smacked of arrogance. Now, he has equally unbearable family and friends.
Don't make the characters speak. Their voices clash horribly with the wonderful natural world you are trying to portray.
Great art, though.