I have to agree with the previous reviewers
The first one was interesting.
The second one was so-so.
The third is just a bit too far...
I don't mean to come off harsh, it's just that you're turning all the manly heroes into pedophiles.
I don't know, I don't really respect the premise or the jokes, but as a student of flash myself, I can certainly appreciate, nay admire, the job you've done with the animation as a whole.
The Cookies Are Stale...
...and so are the jokes. OH HO! :) The art was quite good, but the Thing's animation looked pretty jerky. Yes, he's made of rock, but he's still got full control over himself. The script was OK; I liked how you included the bit with the "Teenage Jailbate". The actual jokes were too few and far between though, and the ending felt rushed. Why would the Thing lay down just because a few cops were pointing guns at him? I think you tried to create a situational comedy which didn't end up extending any further then the surface situation. What I mean to say is that watching the Flash didn't tell me or show me anything I couldn't have presumed just by looking at the title.
times four
it's pretty much one joke, first spread (thinly) over one cartoon, then repeated four times...
We get it, pedo's suck. okay. now what?
lol
it's clobberin' time
It's almost like...
...you tried to submit it as soon as possible.. it seems incomplete and lacks the humor the predecessors had!
No. All 4 parts are meant to be viewed as one cartoon. I spent a at least 3 months on all of them. I think thats more than enough time for a single animator to spend on such a project.