Hmm . . .
Well the fact that you were on a tight time constraint is evident. To get it in on time you seem to have sacrificed a background, and rather than search for and tie in sound effects, you just raised the music levels. It all worked in a stylized kind of way, and it is important to see that periodically, rather than having a constant stream of "standard style flash". Just the same, I feel that the absence of shading did significant damage to the overall quality of the flash. I realize that you probably would have had to sacrifice a large slice of social life to add shading and background and still get it in before the deadline, and that is something few of us are willing to do. The plot line is incredibly standard (Pico save Nene) but hey, what can ya do? Oh, and that is a really small knife that Nene stabbed Whitey with. Smaller than a pairing knife. Even with repeated stabs, a single wound of that size is not really life threatening, unless the spinal cord is cut, in which case Whitey wouldn't have fallen to his knees. It would have looked like a marionette who's strings had suddenly been cut. Either way, good job. Sequel, really?