too big
For a sprite parody with 4 scenes (which werent that funny) the file size was big and by the way half of those didnt make sense in a non-funny kind of way..... For your next parody make the file size smaller and try to use better effects and some scenes that actually make sense..
Right I Have 215 Libery items and creadits!
Needs some work
Dude! The filesize was way too big and I honestly didn't like this.Don't get angry but I thought it was boring and it made me very sleepy and you should had inserted more effort in making this.There are so many mario parodies in newgrounds and we don't need more that are not that good to watch. Next time you make another movie please make sure its as good as the
other mario parodies I've watched. Okay this a long review I'll stop now.
Cool, but...
You need a preloader. Go get one, then resubmit. Odds are, you'll make it in.
Wayyy too big!
Well, the music was high quality and stuff but for a sprite movie that barely lasted 3 minutes, the filzesize is just way too big. For people on a slow connection, its gonna suck if they have to wait so long just to see a VERY short series of mario skits. Maybe you should take the song out of the preloader to cut it down.
As for the flash itself, it was kinda boring lol. everything moved really slowly and to be honest we've all seen mario fall off a cliff/get hit by a random object/ swear at luigi 4,000 times already!
so yeah, if you make a fourth episode, I'd increase the speed and perhaps add some punchlines that weren't predictable. as well as cut the file size down (compress your sound, etc), this should honestly only be 1MB tops.
hope this helps
-lenko