I like it but...
I have to agree it certainly isn't your best- the good parts are really, well, GOOD but they seem kind of unrelated and they're all linked together with a fairly bland techno loop. This track has isn't with out it's charms but it isn't as fantastic as some of the other things I've seen from you.
hmmm, liked the begining but...
i didn't like it, the beginning told me wow, this is gonna be an awesome techno dream trance kind of chaoz, but the rest of the song wasn't like that, and to me, it didn't sound good, probably the only disappointment i've ever had from you.
Not your best... Didn't like the mood changes
The mood changes were a good idea, but they're too drastic and far apart. If you elaborated on each part, and the "energetic parts" needed more variation. Overall, I think this would have done better as two different songs, but being Paragon means you have some of the all time best songs out on the audio portal. This isn't a bad song, but considering how good most of your songs are, this isn't at the same caliber. Good job, and good luck in your future songs.
(btw, red 13 kicks ass)
it was pretty good but the ending where you tied both parts togeather sounded alot better then the rest of it. consider making a whole song with both parts tied togeather?
Good song, but
To me, this doesn't belong with the other Chaoz songs. It just doesn't have the energy that all the other Chaoz songs have! It is still a good song, but I personally wouldn't include it in the Chaoz series.
As a song in itself, it is good, although it does still sound unfinished. The inconsistencies that you refer to as mood changes are too frequent, and cause the song to not flow very well at all. The transitions are stiff, abrupt, and too numerous. It's like you've combined several different song ideas into a compilation of unfinished songs; none of them ever really become anything more than a demo.
As another addition to the Chaoz series, this is a disappointment. As a ParagonX9 song, this is mediocre. As a song compared with the average Newgrounds song, this is a good song. I hope to see another true Chaoz song from you in the future! I hope the shortcomings of this song are simply a result of you feeling pressured to release another Chaoz piece, but if you are going in a different musical direction than my own preferences would like, more power to you, I'm sure it will work out great.