the 1st 1/2
its a tad too rough to hear its not as smooth as it should be but i'm lovin' the 2nd 1/2
the beats are a little too heavy and overwhelming at moments it needs a little work your right that it has some errors to fix here and there but all in all u did a good job :)
I like it but...
I have to agree it certainly isn't your best- the good parts are really, well, GOOD but they seem kind of unrelated and they're all linked together with a fairly bland techno loop. This track has isn't with out it's charms but it isn't as fantastic as some of the other things I've seen from you.
Starts off incredibly, but loses steam
I think the beginning melody is excellent, and you could definitely make a whole song from it. However, I don't particularly like the D'n'B you bring in around 0:35 - and the mood changes after that throw off the awesomeness that is the first part of the song. While that's just my opinion, and I see from the other comments that some others don't feel the same, I would have far preferred it if the whole song continued in the style from the beginning.
it was pretty good but the ending where you tied both parts togeather sounded alot better then the rest of it. consider making a whole song with both parts tied togeather?
Very Cool
Wow nice this was some lighter sound and builds up into the intense sound so nice work here, Very nice I have no changes in mind for this awsome piece, I am glad I have the chance to go back through some of your stuff they are pretty amazing if you ask me, the quality of your work is "PRETTY-SOLID" and you bring some deep depth of sound that "I-DONT-NORMALLY-HEAR" and thats a plus here so very nice sound work here I really enjoyed this.
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I have no changes in mind for this awsome piece
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