again, great work
Don't understand why everybody's complaining, especially that idiot below me who gave you 0 score. Everythings well done, just tell the story like you want and the way you want, if you try to satisfy everybody you'll destroy the whole thing. Go on like you did! 5/5 and 10/10
Could of had better story
Didnt care for it that much as far as the story went. Animation was briliant tho.
Needs improvement
Seriously, this is no different than the other primal wars. I loved the other ones, but after watching this, I hate the whole series.
Another Job Well Done, But...
As I've come to expect, this flash had superior artwork and superior storyline. The movements looked real, the setting kept true and it still amazes me you still payed attention to the fact lionesses do most of the work, which is why all lion soliders are female. Or you wanted more boobs; I'm not sure which. That being said, there were numerous points that disappointed me.
The first was the over all "milking" of the storyline. Not to say you want to make another fifty episodes of this flash (like one reviewer decided to state) but that the entire flash could have been capped up in a small montage scene rather than making it an entire episode. It seemed to drag on so much so that I really lost interest for the first time in the whole telling of the story. That's not to say I'm one of those "less story, more fighting" type of people, but this episode of the serise seems to be the exception to the rule. We get it, he's on the run, move on!
My second issue with the flash are the small parts where the frame rate becomes choppy. This has been a consistent issue, but now it seems to be more of a medium issue than anything else. Flash is a good substitue for the old fashioned frame-by-frame method, but doesn't always give perfect results. Newgrounds also doesn't support the space that some artists need to make truly spectacular works of art. I dunno which it is, flash being pushed to the limit, or the fact you need to find some way to curbe it without losing the volume and complexity of your artwork, but something is still up.
Other than those two issues, the flash was on par with your work, but definately not your best. Keep up the good work and I hope to see Primal War 17 soon!
WOW
this looks like a real cartoon! one of the (underrated) best series on Newgrounds!