hrm...
I only have one thing to say about this...
you dont have to point out EVERY joke...
i mean i know there are plenty of dumbasses out there, but even then its pretty obvious.
Reviews for "Ytown Public 4"
McRhyme responds:
Oh... I know. I'm just very concerned about those dumbasses. I'll throw in some less obvious jokes (and no one will get them).
i guess...
you have the graphical knacks, but if you don't mind my saying so i think you may need to hire someone else to write the jokes. honestly, that "stupid joke book" would probably need to show up more than just once... and while the acting has gotten better, the sound quality really hasn't...
McRhyme responds:
The sound quality has improved some. It has, but it still isn't perfect, far from really. The jokes are not all funny. I know that. The book joke was a failiure. I added the book because I wanted the have another VIEWER'S VOICE, but I gave up and submitted. I'm thinking of deleting that part.
Funniest so far...
That was the funniest out of the 4. The scene with the hitch-hiker was good :D
lol
that was good
This wasn't bad. I think the main problem is that you don't seem to have a good vocal range. You might be too close to the microphone. I do think the animation is good. I think it works well for the tone. A lot of it just wasn't funny.
The funniest thing is the title. Yeah, and now it's 2015. Wow, long time since this was reviewed. I knew he'd be eaten by a shark at the end. Not great, but just fine.