Don't let the 14 year olds fool you...
You're not very good at this whole story telling thing. Grafics are still good, as usual. Sound is still poor, as usual (sound fx?). And the writing on this thing still kills more brain cells than P.G.A. Please, for all that is good and holy, get an actual writer. Use your animation skills in conjunction with someone else's writing, cause some people just can't tell a joke, and you're one of those people.