Needs work
I'd firstly try to concentrate on your skills at drawing and animating. If you use a smaller tool and zoom in, you'll get better control of your drawing tools. The animation is a decent quality, but the drawing style does let it down...
I'd seriously reconsider the use of paintbrushes for your writing - you can use fonts quite easily and it looks better. Those two adjustments alone will make such a difference to your games.
You've shown that you can utilise a reasonably challenging game interface, so the next step is to make the game look good. Maybe come up with some sort of movie about pogger instead, to practice the drawing skills required?
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