I agree with Penguin
I was sadden by the music stopping. It was a good song, and left the rest of the reading lacking. (Thanks to the loss of background noice)
Aside from the music situation, which I'm sure you've already taken note of, I too found a spelling error, "If you read thsi tutorial". And agreeing with past reviews, grammar can be a bit off.
However, overall, great job on the flash, it was precise and to the point, nothing fancy, or lacking in effort. Good job.
Thank you
i keep this tutorial in mind to write my reviews
meh
it was ok :3
I really don't see the point in this tutorial.
This didn't teach me anything I didn't know, and it is a pretty poor tutorial. I do see that you put in some effort so I shall be generous. 7/10 3/5.
Excellently presented
The graphic were smooth and really fitted in with the review.
However the grammar was a bit shoddy in places and the music just stopped after a while ... no repeat or way of getting it back!
The tutorial was very good but as others have said "Show examples of a good review". Highlight the Do's aswell as the Don'ts!
Other than that very well made!
Sound 1
Graphics 3
Storyline ... (that's another point ... for tutorials and random flashes, how do we grade their storyline? You never said.)
Loader 2
"Storyline ... (that's another point ... for tutorials and random flashes, how do we grade their storyline? You never said.)"
I wrote that down and fixing it now :)