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Reviews for "How to review?"

Well that was boring.

"meh meh meh look at me, do as I say, don't express your opinions how you want, do it MY way!" was the message that I got from this Hitleresque conformist propaganda. Didn't you say something about having a story in that? WHERE WAS YOUR STORY????
No, seriously, that was all right... Very nicely presented, visually stunning and with a message we can all get down to. It's a shame the soundtrack was mediocre and the entertainment value is NIL. A good idea and a noble cause, but I feel that only the lower end of the NG IQ spectrum will benefit, as there are plenty of us who write sensible, informative reviews... Although obviously not enough for your liking.
I would have given this 3/5 and 5/10 but your spelling and grammar abilities are not up to scratch. So 2 and 3.

Pedropmp responds:

You obviously didn't read the whole tutorial, as in the part of the "storyline" I tell that in tutorials or random comedy, the rule doesn't apply.
Anyways thanks for the feedback :)

I dont want to write a summary here

I already know how to review but decided to see what your tutorial had to offer anyways.

You had some nice graphics and music, but the thing was. They were rather annoying. When you want to learn something, you want to learn something. You do not want to wait for something that seems like ages before you can actually start reading.

The reading brings me to my second point, your text was waaaay to small. I seriously wonder why you made the text so freaking small.

Other than that it was OK I guess. I didn't thought it was really that much the same as the FAQ says, though.

I give you a six because you obviously spend some time at this and the graphics were nice (even though, too slow).

Cya,

ArmoredSandwich aka ImWithNoob.

Pedropmp responds:

That's correct the movie takes a while to load and I'm aware of that, I'll try to fix that ;)
Thanks for the fair review and rating.

Nice movie

Hate the subject, tho. I find it very annoying that a review can be revoked almost by any negative statement it may contain, but the author can reply all sorts of profanities and there is no protocol to have THAT revoked.

I also find it hypocritical that NG has a "Turd of the week" category and has two voting options that either call the submission "crap" or say that it's worse than "poop", yet if a reviewer uses any derogatory words he can be called on it, get his review deleted and so on.

Pedropmp responds:

You are absolutely correct but those category's aren't really connected with the reviews.
About the voting, I agree with you, it sounds kinda sarcastic.

Pretty Good

That seems like a fairly large file, for a short tutorial like that and that might of half been the music... so yeah. I think you should give NG review guidelines, bc thats important too. I saw you had some of it, but there's also those who say its stolen and comments go on like that for pages as opposed to them informing a staff member or blowing the whistle if its still under judgement and people who say this doesn't belong on the front page or w/e. The star thing was nice, but it would be more useful for the old reviews with the individual star ratings for all the jenks. I think its always useful to give the comment sandwhich. So other than that it looked nice and gave the basics for reviews in a simple manner thats easy for everyone.

Pedropmp responds:

Thanks for the great feedback. I?m aware of the loader time and I'm gonna fix it once I have the time to :)

Informative.

Covers a lot of good points. Good animation, too. However, the music stopped playing after a short while.

Pedropmp responds:

Yeah, I tried to add another music but in the end it didn't work so I simply said "what the hell, one song is enough"