Nice!
Nice piece of art! Don't really know much to say, I could say perhaps graphics should improve but then, when you see the fight scenes you really realise you have the "sketchy animation style" and I found it a very nice style to look at...
There was one part I didnt like... When the serpent twirls around him when he's an angel, it suddenly looks very bad drawn and animated, becouse just stabs a few times, and it looks really weird...
But still I like it! keep up the work!
Not bad!
For a FBF movie, this was pretty good. I like your style; it has much potential. Keep working on movie elements (i.e. scene transitions, background, etc.) and your animations will improve. Good job!
Not too shabby
I gave you a 7 because I think that you have the animating skills, some scene were really well done, your ideas for animation were nice, although the overall flash needs more in between frames because it's too laggy. You could rework your style too. I know it's a lot of work, but better graphics catch way more people.
Also, remove the buttons, this is a movie, movies aren't made to be interactive. For the music transition, some fade-outs will do perfectly. Then center your text to the middle of the screen so people know better where to read and copy lots of frames so people have the time to read. Then you get on with the next chapter by fading the text.
I'm impressed by you dynamism, but you clearly need more skills ^^b
Good job for your first submission!
fell short
the beginning and end of the movie were good for the quality of drawing, but the middle just felt lazy, like you were showing the basic frame of what you were going to make. Like I was watching a story board. The animation was smooth, but the quality felt cheep. Over all good story line, fun movie to watch.
I'll keep that in mind, thanks for the review.
Didn't enjoy it
I didn't enjoy it but I believe you have potential