Reviews for Ascendence

[IndecentClown]

Good Stuff

I liked this a lot. You can see a lot of potiental in the story and in your own animation.

My few minor problems with the movie are the following:

1) Needs more frames. It would be better if the animation wasn't so choppy.

2) Your style varies a lot from scene to scene. I'm not sure if this was done on purpose or what, but consistency would have flowed better.

3) I liked the audio/music but the transitions weren't smooth.

4) Buttons I found to be pointless (i read your reason for why they are there). You could have just went with a black screen with text. It would have a had a better feel instead of the viewer having to come out of the trance you want them.

It might sound like I didn't enjoy your work, but I really did. And I want to see more of it. Even if its a Ascendence: Director's Cut attention.

bluecameraman responds:

well, the style variance is due to the fact that it took me all semester to complete it, and I guess my style changed over that time ^_^ thanks for the review
I'll try and fix it up.

[DrunkenCat]

Nice!

Nice piece of art! Don't really know much to say, I could say perhaps graphics should improve but then, when you see the fight scenes you really realise you have the "sketchy animation style" and I found it a very nice style to look at...

There was one part I didnt like... When the serpent twirls around him when he's an angel, it suddenly looks very bad drawn and animated, becouse just stabs a few times, and it looks really weird...

But still I like it! keep up the work!

[Rijenon]

It was very good

It was indeed very good for your first submission. It flowed well, and the music choices fit. However, the animation could stand to be a bit better. Not that it was bad, but it could still be better. And when the music switched, aside from when a button was used to continue, the transition was not very smooth.

Final score? 8/10

[RubyKnight]

Great Movie, Little Rough Tho

It was a little rough but I loved watching it. You chose the perfect music for it. The art, even though it is a little rough, was well done and you were very creative with the animation(it was definitely rough with a frame-by-frame though). Liked the story as well. 4/5, 8/10

[Kensuke2548]

Awesome but...

It is very reminescent of the fights in DBZ like Goku and Frieza and Teen Gohan and Cell. It kinda mixes them together. but in a totally epic way. Nice work dude ill look for u in the future