yeah, it was cool and all, but...
it could have been soooooo much more. it had some good funny inside jokes to us RTS pro micro'ers, but you could have included some more jokes rather than just reusing the whole 'seeing into the future and predicting what's next' joke. i mean it's good that u used that but specific examples from different games could have been way better to add as well.
you included an fps game but not even an rts game in there... it's either you didn't think about it or you were being a little lazy, not wanting to animate a whole base or army or whatnot.
what you're doing is trying to joke about RTS gamers, and most of the people who get the jokes are RTS gamers anyway, so why not include more specific inside jokes?
good work overall but it was pretty much just repetitive and slightly funny dialogue. could have been way better and i feel it was missing something.