nice
that was a beast, maybe practice your animation a bit.
nice
that was a beast, maybe practice your animation a bit.
Very Nice
The visual style is definetely something that I like, I guess it's about how liberating music can be (that's what I walked away with). Hope to see more like this.
Hmm
Not bad, good job.
Good but
It was nice but the animation, I think you repeated to much, although, I do repeat a lot myself, saves a lot of time and work. It's a nice song and I think a better story and a faster story without the many repeat would work way better. What is your frame rate that you did this at? I have a feeling you should increase it. Nice work though.
I'm glad the animation was ok. I'm a bit new to flash where I actually try. I didnt touch the frame rate, so I guess it's at the default. How do you change the rate? Also, was the musc synced up? I think it goes off when viewed online... anyway, thank you much for the helpful review!
needs improvement
though, i love the song, the animations didn't seem to fit. work on it, though, i see potential in you.
Were the animations out of sync, or do you think I followed the wrong idea about what the song conveys? I'm glad you see hope in me yet, do you have any suggestions or particular things I should work on? Thanks for the review, and I appreciate all advice!