Very nice
The animation was very nice and truly interesting. I also found that although the music was off at the beginning, it seemed to fit a bit better when it approached the end. The main problem with the music sync was that the music started a second too late, which threw off everything else.
The other large problem was the keyboard animation sync, in which the faceless character hit the notes at very odd time in correspondence with the music. Nice work, can't wait for more.
Thankyou, anonymous person o.O. I need to figure out the music deal. It is only off sync when I upload it. Anyway, i'm working on a more high-quality flash, with the toadies "i come from the water." I'll let you know in an e-mail =). And keep voting five on this EVERY DAY :D so I can get a good batting average to start a collab on this account.
Good but
It was nice but the animation, I think you repeated to much, although, I do repeat a lot myself, saves a lot of time and work. It's a nice song and I think a better story and a faster story without the many repeat would work way better. What is your frame rate that you did this at? I have a feeling you should increase it. Nice work though.
I'm glad the animation was ok. I'm a bit new to flash where I actually try. I didnt touch the frame rate, so I guess it's at the default. How do you change the rate? Also, was the musc synced up? I think it goes off when viewed online... anyway, thank you much for the helpful review!
needs improvement
though, i love the song, the animations didn't seem to fit. work on it, though, i see potential in you.
Were the animations out of sync, or do you think I followed the wrong idea about what the song conveys? I'm glad you see hope in me yet, do you have any suggestions or particular things I should work on? Thanks for the review, and I appreciate all advice!
Very Nice
The visual style is definetely something that I like, I guess it's about how liberating music can be (that's what I walked away with). Hope to see more like this.
nice
that was a beast, maybe practice your animation a bit.