Choppy
The animation was a little choppy and the coloring could use some work as well. Other then that the animation was ok.
Also I can't stop thinking that this flash bares a striking resemblance to Gundum Seed.
Reviews for "Shattered Heaven Op. 1"
AdamTilford responds:
Hmmm really?
Nah, lol. After writing the first book I wanted to do the art and I had no clue what the mechs would look like. Then I started watching Gundam, namely Zeta, Wing, and Seed. So therefore a lot, if not all of my mecha designs are influenced by them. And then there was the wing design for the main mech, all of my concepts sucked, and soon fell in love with Strike Freedom....lol.
So yeah, Seed was a major influence, whether it was it's awesome music or it's great designs (because the story was filled with plot holes!)
Cool
Looks awsome! seriously, i can't wait, good luck man!
Although I am personly againced flash trailers it looks pretty awsome
AdamTilford responds:
It's not really a trailer. Watch any anime, you see they have opening sequences. This is just the opening sequence to mine.
no sound.
It's kind of great, but sound would be nice. 5/10.
AdamTilford responds:
Umm? There's sound I don't know what you're talking about. There's music, and not for nothing, but when do anime intros have sound other than the music? Last time I checked they don't.
Trust me, there will be sfx in the series along with music and VAs.
Meh
Not the best
AdamTilford responds:
Thanks for such an indepth amazing critique. I'm in awe.