wow....
your sir, are a true artist.
Reviews for "Shattered Heaven Op. 1"
Great
I can tell you put a lot of effort into this. Can't wait for the first episode. By the way, do you have a sponsor, or are you getting any money out of this? It'd suck to do all this work with no pay.
Well, all I can add for improvement is: Work on their faces. They look a little amatuer, the way you've drawn them, especially the noses.
Cool want to see more.
That was a great opening. I happen to help run the University of Akron's Anime Association and have to say that was one good opening. I just wish it was a little bit more polished and I would show this but unfortunetly were not allowed to show fan stuff sorry, but if this where ever to become lissenced and put on tv. I would totally show this. Keep up the good work and maybe you will get paid. Peace.
AdamTilford responds:
Thanks! And this isn't fan work. I wrote the novels that this is based on. I'm currently trying to get the first book published, it's in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award. I always did the art for it and always wanted to do an animation of it. So I started to work in Flash and self learn how to FBF, tween and Action Scripting. I'm still learning but I'm learning every second of it.
I've received so many amazing auditions and I'm currently storyboarding the first episode. I really appreciate what you said. The first episode will be a lot more polished, this had a lot of stuff that got messed up and well, it's a long story.
Again thanks so much!
Great job!
The improvements you've made are quite obvious in this, as it is quite easy to see the old parts from the new. Can't wait till the first episode to see how much more you improve!
And im gonna get stuck tryin to find that album now, it's definately addictive!
There is one thing that bugs me though, why is it that the pilot of the red dual-saber mech (he's shown next to it so im assuming he is the pilot lol) look like he has the mouth of a puppet....? o.o
AdamTilford responds:
Thanks. Hahah, yeah, it's a beard, one of those thin line beards around the mouth. That's why, lol.
Glad you liked it. Yeah, I tend to improve vastly from each project. And with the voice acting talent I'm getting, the animation will be a bigger improvement.
BADASS
that shit is beadass bro. Keep it up cant wait for this rto come out