Nice
It was a good flash but dont be so insecure man, you're a good animator!
And as far as your message goes:
" HELP ME!!! If you help I'll find someway to repay you, really, I will. "
lol that just sounds wrong on so many levels...;)
But seriously, dont do something like paying voiceartists (or selling your kidney) to record for you, unless you want Tom Cruise in your movies. There are a lot of talented artist who'll do it for just being credited. That, are you can just invest 20 euros or so in a decent quality mic.
Keep practising,
Grizz