yeah...
I saw a lot of potential for something really funny, but it wasn't quite there. it almost felt like an old sitcom, minus the laugh track. Otherwise, it was an ok animation. Not a personal favorite, but it was good work. Keep it up. I like the better developed story. Just need to work on keeping the humor up with it. Don't take away from the story, just try to add more humor off of it.
This was meant to be more plot than comedy as opposed to the past five episodes. I'm glad people are being more honest with this one so I know what to get better at!
I dunno...
Reminds me a little too much of those old 25 cent sci-fi comics with random good guys and some strangely deformed bad guy that has a german accent and is always trying to destroy the world or something with a gicantic machine that uses "power beyond your control, puny humans". The artwork is good though, I must give you that.
PS: Challenge! Try making an animation with no tweens whatsoever! =D
I think I did at least one episode with ALMOST no tweens, but...I'm such a fan of cheap shortcuts!!!
wow...
i miss the humor.the story was good but i think you cut down to much.dan reminds me of fry from futurrama lol.ether way i love your show.and if i throw in some extra $ would you signe the shirts?
uhh. hmm. okay...well
i thought this would be good and all with the opening credits (they were really good) but after that, it was all downhill. it was like a flash soap opera, there wasn't really any moving around, just talking and corny jokes. sorry man, but this didn't do it for me.
next time, in part two or whatever, just have the characters move a little more.
3/5
-crepth
This is, as a matter of fact, the least funny and least animated episodet. That's not to say you'll like any of the earlier ones, but I think you would dislike them slightly less :)
i dont know what do say
two words SUCKED ALOT i didnt like it too much i thought it was gonna be longer well i guess i thought wrong
You'll probably like older episodes more, they're funnier AND mostly longer. :)