Reviews for Story maker beta

[tdaddy41]

Great Idea

Needs more stories and some less annoying music.

One day, when Ass Penis was flying her Fuck TITS, her Fuck TITS beeped, signaling that it was runing low on fuel, so Ass Penis landed on the nearest planet, planet Vagina man. Which was inhabited by slutty pussy's, so Ass Penis got out her trusty dong and proceded onto the surface of planet Vagina man, as he walked away from her Fuck TITS, he saw a slutty pussy, he faced his dong at the slutty pussy and shot it in the asshole. The pussy fell to the ground, with blood pouring out of it's asshole, Ass Penis bent over to the dead pussy and searched its corps for anything that her Fuck TITS could use for fule. But sadly, no such luck, there was no fule, but as Ass Penis stood back up, she turned around, and she saw a group of slutty pussy, now she regreted shooting the pussy in the asshole, because now all the slutty pussy's where lustful, and they ran after her. Ass Penis was bashed to a bloody pulp with dildo's, and was then fed to the king of planet Vagina man. The End (wasnt that a happy ending)

[captainwillies]

my story.. twas mild entertainment

One day, when penis face was flying his penis ship, his penis ship beeped, signaling that it was runing low on fuel, so penis face landed on the nearest planet, planet boobylon 5. Which was inhabited by cock cockeater's, so penis face got out his trusty sperm gun and proceded onto the surface of planet boobylon 5, as he walked away from his penis ship, he saw a cock cockeater, he faced his sperm gun at the cock cockeater and shot it in the penis. The cockeater fell to the ground, with blood pouring out of it's penis, penis face bent over to the dead cockeater and searched its corps for anything that his penis ship could use for fule. But sadly, no such luck, there was no fule, but as penis face stood back up, he turned around, and he saw a group of cock cockeater, now he regreted shooting the cockeater in the penis, because now all the cock cockeater's where happy, and they ran after him. penis face was bashed to a bloody pulp with penis's, and was then fed to the king of planet boobylon 5. The End (wasnt that a happy ending)

[chocobowz]

its ok

One day, when Mr Ned was flying her mini van, her mini van beeped, signaling that it was runing low on fuel, so Mr Ned landed on the nearest planet, planet taconomano. Which was inhabited by scrumptous muffinator's, so Mr Ned got out her trusty Milk canno and proceded onto the surface of planet taconomano, as he walked away from her mini van, he saw a scrumptous muffinator, he faced his Milk canno at the scrumptous muffinator and shot it in the Boob. The muffinator fell to the ground, with blood pouring out of it's Boob, Mr Ned bent over to the dead muffinator and searched its corps for anything that her mini van could use for fule. But sadly, no such luck, there was no fule, but as Mr Ned stood back up, she turned around, and she saw a group of scrumptous muffinator, now she regreted shooting the muffinator in the Boob, because now all the scrumptous muffinator's where horny, and they ran after her. Mr Ned was bashed to a bloody pulp with katana's, and was then fed to the king of planet taconomano. The End (wasnt that a happy ending)

[Little-Rena]

Okay

Well to start I have to say that there is no need for the two play buttons, just have one, it keeps things easier and a skip button for the intro would be nice since it takes up quite a bit of time. The menu was okay, though pretty simple, it had a nice background but could do with some better looking buttons.

The actually story making part, well it wasn't looking to nice, the text boxs had a horrible gradient, try using a grey to another shade of grey if anything, because the one you used doesn't fit in too well. And the button for the story, eh, keep it simple but smooth, because it doesn't fit with the theme to well. Also, just one story doesn't offer too much replay value in my opinion, could make verious stories just for more fun and such, not a bad start though.

2/5

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[Dew]

It's been done.

To be honest with you, there is nothing funny about turning an overused idea into flash. I mean, I am sure we all love those books you can get that do this type of thing, but in flash there just dosen't seem to be a point to it. Not only that, but the sheer effort you put in was minimal to say the least. I can see it on the fact that you didin't even take the time to fix grammar and spelling, is it really that hard to put somthing in Microsoft Word? Overall this is just bad. It's unorginal, unfunny and imature. Now only if people relized how abusive the reviews below me are...