it was ok
i thought that it was sorta funny, it wasn't something i expected. The only problem i found was that the "watch the original" didn't work. I dont know if it's my computer or it's a bug. anyway, it was still good!
Reviews for "Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 3"
Jimtopia responds:
Yeah well, that seems to be the main complaint, thanks for reviewing.
Not bad
I liked the idea behind it and the characters, although simple-looking, were colourful and it kind of looked right. On the down side, all the movements were way too slow. You need to work on the pacing a bit. Keep it up though and i hope to see more!
Jimtopia responds:
Cool! ^_^
Alright
-Good-
The graphics were pretty good in this flash, the background is better then your usual ones. There was a spec of humor, but I only chuckled but still a decent one.
-Bad-
Well the fact of having no voice acting realy draws away for this type of flash. I would like to see you try and experiment with Jim and try and add VA and some arms, you know just to try it out.
-Overall-
Pretty funny, but I woulden't think "Jim flashes" are a good fit for this type of flash.
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Jimtopia responds:
Weird that you wouldn't think that Jim is meant for this type of flash, because this type of flash was the only thing I made when I first started out. Also, I am going to be doing a voiced cartoon soon. You'll see...
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^^Good Points^^
It was a funny play on words. Provided a minute of entertainment and a good joke on the end of it.
^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...I'm not really getting much out of this. I know it's a short, but really if you want to make shorts that people will like, they need to be explosive and have something really funny that people will lol at. This is just a joke.
Jimtopia responds:
I suppose you're right.
Short and sweet.
I quite like this one, it reminds me of the one joke about a miser talking to his wife, who offers him a penny for his thoughts twice and he talks about their marriage etc, then the third time, he replies "I was actually wondering about when I'd get the two pennies you owed me already"
The layout was very similar to your others, therefore a very simple piece. Returning characters make it familiar, but the genius is in the joke itself.
Look forward to the next one!
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Jimtopia responds:
Lol thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!