well...
it isnt a BIG and COOL movie...but is GREAT for my, bcuz do flash is to difficult to me >,<
Reviews for "Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 3"
Jimtopia responds:
Glad you liked it.
Nice one
Hehehe, nice one. I liked the joke in this, it made me laugh. You don´t really see that kind of humor often on NG (at least I don´t), so lots of pluspoints for that. Quality-wise it was also pretty well made if you ask me. The background looked great, the characters looked pretty good too (seems like you got your own style and I like that), the sounds were good (loved the balloon popping sound) and there was also nothing wrong with the animation.
The only complaints I have are about the title screen. I suggest you move the text up a little bit so that the dots won´t fall out of the oval shape. it kinda looks ugly this way to me. Also, I don´t like the white background you used there. Perhaps you should mix a few colors there or just draw something. One last suggestion: I think some music in the menuscreen would be nice. An intro tune for your series or something like that.
Overall 8 out of 10, 4 out of 5. It was a very nice flash in my opinion. Not much room for improvement, beside the menuscreen. But that isn´t really the most important part of a flash, so it´s okay if you want to keep it the way it is now. Anyways, keep up the good work and I´d like to see more of these.
~Auz, Review Request Club
Jimtopia responds:
Well I made the menu like that mainly so I didn't have to re-draw a new menu every time. Anyway, glad you liked the joke. Thx for the review.
the concept makes me think and chuckle
I loved that concept! Such an imaginative idea and the type of thing that could only ever be clearly shown as an animation.
I'd have loved to see it fleshed out a bit, maybe someone exchanging people's thoughts and stuff, but enjoyed all I saw.
I don't much care for the title screen though - the beveled text doesn't go well with the flat colours imo. The red overlapping both yellow and blue looks garish and ugly. The play button would be better in the centre, where folk have grown to expect it.
However, I like the way Jim grabs the bubble and the sounds.
More importantly, the concept makes me think and chuckle. Seriously awesome.
Jimtopia responds:
Glad you liked it. Hmmm, for some reason no one likes the menu, I guess I'll re-make that.
~REVIEW~
---I liked the faded in green loading animation in the beginning, reminded me a lot of my engineering classes basic outlines for objects.
---I'm not exactly sure about the title screen, it looks very drab, none of the colors really jumped out at me.
---I liked how you shadowed everything up to the sun, just a little detail that makes a movie so much better.
---Stay away from the gradients, it didn't look too good on your character. I recommend trying a different kind of color combination.
---I know that this was a short but you could easily make some of your later episodes longer by putting in a good plot.
~Review Request Club~
Jimtopia responds:
Well I don't intend on changing any characters color schemes anytime soon, but I'm glad you liked the cartoon itself. And don't worry about plots, I've got some good stuff coming up.
cool
Nice twist on the saying. I laughed on the inside. Could've had more though
Jimtopia responds:
Yeah, it could have had more.