Technically Flawless...
Like I said,,there is nothing wrong in the execution of this piece. The synths and beats line up and work well together and there is a smooth flow from synth to synth. The problem is that it seems a little generic. In its self, that's not a bad thing but I think if you found something to make it uniquely yours (like an acapella tweaked to the tempo) it would make the song less monotonous. Like they say in writing, you've got their attention, now what are you going to do with it?