Reviews for Principled Depravity

[monkat7]

Hmm..

It was good. No doubts about that, but what it really lacks is subtlety...I mean it starts with background information, bla bla bla, and then suddenly his wife has been kidnapped? Just something to work on in the future :P.

LogFish responds:

Well, NG has never been particularly good at being patient I've found - you can stretch out a suspense moment, but a character-development moment I'm not so sure about! Anyway there's much more I have planned for poor old Graham hahaha, he's gonna have a lousy time - so stay tuned lol.

But point taken - I'll try and work on structure a bit more in future episodes!

[Tatterz]

Not bad,

Crisp,stylish,Sin City....whats not to like?

LogFish responds:

Thanks!

[nickbarber]

pretty good

the only thing that I thought was bad, was that there weren't any backrounds, just white blank space. if you had fixed that it would have been even better.

LogFish responds:

Thanks - yea I'll be working on those 'details' more in future episodes ;)

[Coaly]

alright

It was pretty good, it had a good plot, basically good sound effects and voices. How much of it was 3d, sometimes the guys looked 3d, sometimes they didn't. Anyway I suggest that you watch sin city again, or maybe something like cowboy bebop and take note of how they do all the shots so that it comes together nicely and you know what's going on, it'll help.

LogFish responds:

At times to keep file size down I used 3D exports of bits of models to just do it in 2D in flash, with about 50 layers all at once in places - which was probably larger per frame than the 3D export would've been go figure, heh.

Thanks for the tips! I'll go give that a look :)

[DJSweetz]

pretty good

I liked this one here. The thing that I did notice was that when he's driving the first time chasing the truck it's from the left side of the car because he shoots up the left side of the truck. Then in later driving scenes he's driving on the right side of the car. Need to keep it consistent. Other then that I rather enjoyed this

LogFish responds:

Thanks! Yea I'll be getting people to spot my inconsistencies before I post it in future heh