Nice
A good job, but yeah, all i can say is, 'audio audio audio!!!'. It would appear alot better with maybe some sound looped, or some more sound effects. But despite that, this was great...
( the 'night-time' sound was just a little repetitive and annoying! lol )
okay one
that was an alright animation. very short, random and not too much to this one here, but it was still okay to check out.
welllll
the animation was kinda boring, the art was not great, sounds were good, and the concept and ending was nice. But other than that, it was not that great. Didn't show a huge amount of talent. And I didn't really enjoy the voice at the end, kinda made the line very dull sounding when it should've been much more warm. It was alright I suppose.
you need to add somthing to the background
like music because the sudden cricket noise is fall too piercing
nothing major just a quite tune would be nice
also adding a bit more motion to the movie would be helpful
Touching...But
A good message, perhaps adding better graphics, or mouth syncing without text. Not bad for a start I guess.