I'm really indifferent on this..
...on one hand being 38 makes you think about mortality. And that in itself is a powerful lesson about life. That makes this more poingant then a lot of films. Scary thing is ,..youi won't realize that your are getting old until it kicks you right in the ass. Thought the day would never come....but it has. Yes i'm a psycho but the whole way you presented this hit a nerve. Great work 5/5 9/9
Nice
A good job, but yeah, all i can say is, 'audio audio audio!!!'. It would appear alot better with maybe some sound looped, or some more sound effects. But despite that, this was great...
( the 'night-time' sound was just a little repetitive and annoying! lol )
well
you did a good job with this, but what you need is music bro....it would be 10 times better with a loop going in the backround. it would make the style look less lazy, and like it was actually what you were going for...ADD MUSIC MAN!
i knew it was kinda plain as it was playin' through, and i thought about addin' some music in the background. i just didn't know what i could put.. but thx for lettin' me know.
Touching...But
A good message, perhaps adding better graphics, or mouth syncing without text. Not bad for a start I guess.
Weak
Why would you make something like this?
i made this because it's one of the first thing i've ever started on while practicin' flash. I didn't wanna let it just sit around in some folder. i wanted to actually atleast try to do somethin' with it, but thx for you positive feedback.