o man....
that was good man...loved the floating manager,
"Please to meet you floating mana-"
"MAKE A PIZZA!!"
lol, that was priceless
I would only suggest you use a different voice for the pizza making kid, to similar to the nerdy kid
Reviews for "Shame by the Slice"
BaconMask responds:
Your comments are noted. I am really glad you liked it! Thanks a lot for watching and reviewing!
Excellent!
I can tell you put a lot of detail into the backgrounds and the characters. I was amazed at how well the characters sprung to life. The facial motions of the mouth, ears, eyes, ect. were all done very well.
The only downside is the tall white guy you see at the beginning with the big nose, could have been designed better. His apearance was clunky and it made him seem more artificial than the others.
As far as animation, it was all generally smooth and added to the sictom-style humor. The fact that it's based on reality makes it even funnier. I'm looking forward to the next part of a soon-2-B awsome series!
keep it up!
BaconMask responds:
It's funny that you mention Derek's appearance. That is the only character directly modeled off of a real person! He looks a LOT like his character there... but maybe I'll revise him a shade for the sequel. Glad you enjoyed, thanks for the review!
I vote....VOTE!!!!!!!
Everything looked great, especialy the floating manager! This was very funny in a way that isnt very common these days. I cant wait for the next one!
BaconMask responds:
I'm glad that you dug the humor! More are on the way!
thumbs up!
Man... you got the floating manager down pretty well lol I've had my run-ins with those kinds of people, and they can be very freaky.
I like this, I do look forward to the sequel. The artwork is excellent. I'm still amazed at how detailed their hands are. The animation itself doesn't feel fluid enough, but it's all good.
Love it, laughed my head off, and as I said, looking forward to that sequel! :D
BaconMask responds:
There will definately be a sequel pretty dang soon. I'm drawing it up right now! Thanks ninja, peace.
halrious
wow that was incredibly original and funny. I loved it when he "double" crossed his fingers, that must have hurt. i would give it a ten, but theres always room for improvement.
BaconMask responds:
Indeed, I agree. Thanks for the review!