it was aight
it was ok i liked the music
but the art was kinda sketchy, even for a doodle.
but thats just me... it was nice over all.. good job
it was aight
it was ok i liked the music
but the art was kinda sketchy, even for a doodle.
but thats just me... it was nice over all.. good job
I'll stick to what pico says:
Nothing too new or interesting.
It's not terrible, it's just... kind of boring.
decent enough i guess
the music kept me interested in it long enough to watch it all the way through. honestly it wasnt that good and i might be able to do better than that myself. screwing around with flash is good, but unless it is truly a piece of quality, keep it on your own computer. however, i did vote to keep this movie alive because i liked the notebook paper/doodles coming to life concept. also, the movie loops. and when it loops it replays the music over itself. you might wanna get that fixed. other than that no problems and try harder the next time.
This doesn't deserve very high
Sorry, but this was really bad. I do think that theres so much work that could be done. Firstly, when you make drawings and just draw a new line each frame, make sure that it looks good and not just really badly drawn. Secondly, there was almost no animation, it was just you hitting f6 basically and drawing a gun or something . I think this may get through, but deserves a low score where improvement is needed.
No Good Man, Sorry.
There's nothing really worth viewing here man. Sorry to say it, but it was pretty bad. If you really want to show a living doodle, don't do it with simple tweens, give it depth and awe-inspirining animation. Anyway, keep it up, and try again. Once you think it will have people stopping to stare, then post it.