really good
considering you say that you're new to flash, this is fantastic. as a user who has been judging flash on this site for several years, i can honestly say that this submission is better than most that i have seen come through the portal. the graphics and animation were very nicely done, earned you big points in my books. this will definitely make it through te portal, and will be humbled if it doesn't win an award of some kind. really, really well done. keep using flash.
Very good
wow... very cool.
thats a real folkstory right?
dude yor audio was incredible, i ahve never heard any video with such clear audio.
and your animations i liked alot.
dude... keep up the good work.
and in your user comments it says were all masters of the arts....
sorry to break it to you, only about the 10% of newgrounds is actually a master of the art, lol, maybe 50% of us are pretty good(youd fall here).
and than you have garbage crap spammers units that go around crapping garbage videos like the uzi unit, and others of the type that or just hidious, i bett if they tried they couldnt make a good flash.
very good job though, i really liked it.
Great One
This is a fresh breathe to a desert of pages.
Good Story and clean look. Keep up the good work.
pretty good
it was a decent flash great graphics and great story....i also liked the fact that there were captions on it....the only thing you could do is make the voice more clear some parts were hard to understand other then that flaw decent flash
Good!
If you've not been using flash for very long and your already quite good...then more practice can only mean good things.
A good plotline, kept me interested.
Sound was clear and crisp.
A worthy 8.