Very good
I Like it. It has a good plot line and a good villian and hero type people. As a matter of fact I would love it if you would put it on a TV station and get a crew of people. Especialy adult swim becasue with something this good you could make some serious money. But there are some flaws I do wish to point out. The first and most mager flaw is how fast paced it is. For example in the sceen were the farmer crow thing dies its just hes grabbed then hes dead also when he fights his father its as if he dosent care he had to kill him at all. That is the only flaw I found as well to. =D Keep up the good work!