Cute!
Real cute story, and good use of expression. Very nice first flash. :)
Only suggestion is to watch the volume of the sound. It was kinda hard to hear the voices over the background
Cute!
Real cute story, and good use of expression. Very nice first flash. :)
Only suggestion is to watch the volume of the sound. It was kinda hard to hear the voices over the background
nice one
that was a pretty nice animation. i liked the storyline behind this one... i don't think i've heard or read it before this one, but it was still quite nice, good drawings and characters and it was quite nice to watch.
good work on it.
Nice way to begin
Nice job on this flash. The sound left room for improvement but overall it was not half bad. The voices were somewhat hard to here. All in all, good job.
-L1ght-Speed-
story
hahaha ive read that story
really only bad thing is the sound