Nice way to begin
Nice job on this flash. The sound left room for improvement but overall it was not half bad. The voices were somewhat hard to here. All in all, good job.
-L1ght-Speed-
Reviews for "The Fox and the Crow"
Cute!
Real cute story, and good use of expression. Very nice first flash. :)
Only suggestion is to watch the volume of the sound. It was kinda hard to hear the voices over the background
Great piece of work with a rough few spots
The animation was very well done and so was the background noises. The voice over itself, however, needs some work as it is quiet and has many pops due to too much air being blown into th mic.
One idea to help with the mic issue is to either hold a thin sock or even pantyhose/stockings in front of it in order to stop your breath from causing the "PWAH" sound.
Also, some of the timing of the lip syncing is slightly off.
I was wondering which version of this fable you were going to use. Very well done over all.
Very nicely done.
Voiceover needs a little work, as it was somewhat hard to understand the dialogue (though I got the gist). Other than that, animation is very well done. I've never heard of that story, but you told it rather well.