Reviews for Mario's Dr. Pepper

[thedarkslayer1]

hehe 0wned

Well i gotta say... that was highly amusing, i loved it xD
Could have been improved in the floowing ways tho:
1) Longer (Yea it was funny how quickly he had revenge tho)
2) A more funny death of the bird, like... idk, mario farting on him or summat? xD
and finally
3) Have mario go super sayian or summat LOL make him go nuts and throw a hissy fit xD

~* Tyrix *~

[Trafalgar]

Not bad

Not half bad. You may want to consider being a little more original with the humour and/or storyline though, as this kinda thing gets posted every day.
Not bad though, keep at it.

[KILLALLCHAVS]

lmao

very funny, short and sweet