yeah short
its very funny... but it's very short....
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Reviews for "Mario's Dr. Pepper"
Only one problem with it
Too short.
Good
This was good and the graphics was pretty enjoyable but it wasn´t great. I´m not saying that you´re bad at sprite animating but there was alot of stuff you have to change/practice on.
Goods:
- Graphics was pretty enjoyable (Keep it that way but keep practicing cause it could still be much better)
- It was funny some few times (Just practice on making funny stuff, and write many ideas down. I once had a problem when I was making a sprite flash. I couldn´t find my own style. I kept making stuff that I didn´t like because it reminded me about other sprite flashs I had watched. But one day, I took a piece of paper and a pencil and started to think. I didn´t try to use anyone elses style but my own, and suddenly a great idea came to me. I wrote and wrote in 2-3 hours and finally I got a storyline that I liked. Short: Try to find ideas by forgetting all other flashs you have ever watched and use your own style)
- You´re pretty good at drawing Mario (However, keep practicing)
Bads:
- You didn´t make many or any sprites by youself (Start practicing. If you don´t got any sprite animating program you can just use Paint. Click CTRL + G at the same time and there will appear alot of squares that can help you draw. You can´t watch the squares if you don´t zoom in)
- Main Menu could be much better (Practice. It´s important to have a good Main Menu cause it makes the viewer interested in the rest of the flash. Some people do just blam flashs with bad Main Menus/beginings without watching the hole flash)
Keep it up!
A bit short.
i noe the length adds tot he humour but mayb it was still a bit short... if it had a bit more length to it id have given it a higher rating.
Very short but I totally... LIKED IT! :]
Very nice ^^
A little note.. Your SITE-button DON'T WORK! =O
Hehe.