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Reviews for "Reiko - Captive Audience"
Not too bad.
Essentially, it was a female drow skating on ice, but I thought the bodies in the water made it humourous enough to give a decent vote.
A little explanation would be nice.
I'm bet you're already tired of hearing this, but I don't really understand why this is on the main page here. I'm sure there's something that I'm missing, or it's something I don't understand, so sorry about that.
I can understand using an already built-up fanbase to showcase a new project, bonus animation, or something like that, but to show it to people who don't know about it isn't really fair, It would've sufficed to provide some sort of explaination other than "Hey, the guy from IllWillPress made this~" and the character's name. And this little animation alone didn't really persuade me to google the name or visit the site, so I'll just leave it lie with whoever likes it now.
It looks like it could easily be done for a weekly sort of cartoon, or another thing along those lines (i don't know if that's what this will be, just saying). It's simple, yet elegant. I'd say to give a bit more detail in the background a bit more, but that may have been because it was zoomed in a bit in the beginning. The kid that looked surprised in the ice made me giggle. I suppose the music fit the scene, though I wasn't too sure of what it was going for. But I like piano-y music.
It gets a 7/10 (B-) from me, mostly becuase of the length and a non-explanation of the character, but I liked the art style for what it was, and the movement was smooth for the framerate. Good job.
TaintedInk responds:
I'm sorry. I guess I thought the cartoon was simple enough not to need any explanation. It was just a short but sweet little gag, and the giggle you got really was the point. So I think you understood as much as was needed, but I will expand the synopsis a bit if it will help.
uh... huh?
As usual, you have good ideas, and bad ones. Some of the original Foamy The Squirrel episodes were totally shit, but some (like indian tech support 1, 2 and 3) and insanely good! As for this..... Give a little more thought into it perhaps.
And to the miserable faggot who commented before me, let's see you do better while keeping one of the best internet toon series's going and up to date. Can't do it? didn't think so! sit down before I hurt yourself.
Finally!
It's funny, actually; to make Reiko look good and be funny, it shouldn't be made by you! This one was the only one so far I actually LAUGHED a little bit in.