Nice Job!
Haha nice job, i loved it, very funny
Reviews for "Twisted Minds Ep. 1"
I'll give you a 4/5 for the effort.
It was good for the most part. I liked the control bar at the top. That was a nice touch. But the voicework was kind of shoddy, and the character animations were somewhat sloppy. The flashbacks were also not very well defined as to where they began and ended, so it created some unnecessary confusion.
Also, when Mark gets his arm cut off, and he turns around, he's simply flipped horizontally, so his remaining arm effectively switches sides, remaining the farthest one from the camera.
Still, it was fairly funny, and you made a whole movie. I can't give this a low score because you clearly worked hard on it and didn't simply slap it together. So, for your hard work, I present you with a 4/5. Just work on those flaws for next time.
Triple-Elemental responds:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you didn't just say I didn't like it but instead gave us some constructive criticism to work with. I agree, the voices aren't the best because of timing confusions and stuff, and I didn't even notice the Mark arm thing. We'll try to work on those things for the next one. The flashbacks, we tried to add a whoosh sound to each one but we didn't add one when they went back, we'll also do that in the next one.
Thanks for watching!
Great cartoon to start a series!
Funny and original, totally good. The only problem was the childish voice for the adult characters, but you can solve it by hiring adult voices (you can ask your dad). Anyway, I hope to see more of this!
Pretty Cool
A nice start to the series, keep working on it, I'll look out for 2. When's it due?
Triple-Elemental responds:
Thanks!
Number two should be finished in about two months or so...look out for it then!
Glad you like it!
Pretty Good
I thought this was pretty funny and enjoyable flash to watch. The intro music was great. What needs improving is the voice quality, the spelling mistakes and some graphics.
With the drawing you should add shadows... it really makes a difference. And the walk cycles were a bit robotic, both of the legs and arms are usually moving at the same time, not one at a time.
Lipsyncing was pretty good, but you definitely need shadows on your drawings. Good work! 7.7/10, 4/5.
-ShortMonkey
Triple-Elemental responds:
We'll try to fix some of those things in the next one.
Thanks for the review!