Pretty Good
I thought this was pretty funny and enjoyable flash to watch. The intro music was great. What needs improving is the voice quality, the spelling mistakes and some graphics.
With the drawing you should add shadows... it really makes a difference. And the walk cycles were a bit robotic, both of the legs and arms are usually moving at the same time, not one at a time.
Lipsyncing was pretty good, but you definitely need shadows on your drawings. Good work! 7.7/10, 4/5.
-ShortMonkey
We'll try to fix some of those things in the next one.
Thanks for the review!
AWSOME!
Yo, I am liking this cartoon man. The humour I added as 10 because it's just so funny xP! Well hope your next piece of work is as good or better than this one!
Thanks man!
Pretty Cool
A nice start to the series, keep working on it, I'll look out for 2. When's it due?
Thanks!
Number two should be finished in about two months or so...look out for it then!
Glad you like it!
Nicely done, TE!
Hey guys,
I love that movie.... IT IS original, surprisingly :p. So nicely done, work on the next one together again, and CYA!
Kyle Tan aka Main Consultant of TE :D
Great cartoon to start a series!
Funny and original, totally good. The only problem was the childish voice for the adult characters, but you can solve it by hiring adult voices (you can ask your dad). Anyway, I hope to see more of this!