Meh
The flash overall animation, and appearence wise was good. But it just get's done and my first thought was "Uhhhhh. . . what?" Obviously you had somthing in mind that was going on here, but with nothing to convay a story. It just seem's like a bunch of broken thought's. Mabee a Pre-lude flash, one leading up to this one, and that would clear thing's up. Add some talking, even if it's just text box's, it would add some depth to the flash. As well as some sound FX other than the background music. Overall it wasn't a bad flash just completly pointless with room for improvment.