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Good... I'm guessing you're pretty new to flash.
Enjoyed it. Could use some work on the voice, however.
Looking forward to sequel n' stuff.
Reviews for "Zombie Wasteland part ONE"
SCUD14 responds:
thank you, yes i was kinda new to full body flash when i submitted this, id made a few crappy stick entries beforehand.
A zombie theme
Nice use of color on this and the narrating was good wouldnt mind some subtitles to go along with this you have really impressed me with your style of film choice here the zombie themed idea here of the film was intense and I really like the whole idea of zombies here with this particular film, so really nice efforts and such a great idea of a film choice.
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A little rough, but definitely good
First of all - good flash. Not amazing, but good. Your art is pretty okay - definitely not groundbreaking, but better than alot of the other stuff in the portal. Sound was good - the Terminator music fit pretty well with the kind of apocalyptic wasteland environment. Voice acting wasn't too bad either. You seem like you could make a fairly decent series out of this, and like you have some talent.
Make more, you'll only get better.
(P.S. - I'm a bit of a zombie fan myself; I've got my own tribute to em in Dawn of the Jeb. Always good to find other zombie hunters out there.)
SCUD14 responds:
I love zombies, I love terminator. thanks.
good.... good....
Not Bad! But the animation could use a little improvement. It seemed like the guns were extremely detailed where as the rest of the film was not. For example, the lens' of the character's glasses were different sizes. Fixing and improving little things like that would greatly improve the overall quality of the flash. The story was ok, but was it a teaser... is there more to come? Anyway, best 'o' luck to ya.
SCUD14 responds:
certainly is more to come.
A work in progress
This is a decent enough animation, but there are a few little pieces which require work:
1) You could do with putting aside part of the animation window for subtitles (ideally, the lower portion of the screen. I'd suggest that you make this black and type the subtitles in white.)
2) Drawing style needs work - some of the features need to be drawn with a thicker line than the pencil tip. Perhaps investing in a tablet would help (I'm assuming that the drawing was done with a mouse) and zooming into the images for greater control over the cursor.
3) Use your own face as an example - when he smiles, you see a line, which moves to a semi-circle. Not good. Look in the mirror and see how your face changes shape when you smile. If you need to, draw a little goatee on your face, to see exactly how it works. Animation of the face is difficult, but adds so much depth if you're going to give images like that.
4) A bigger screen wouldn't hurt, either.
I look forward to seeing the next installment.
[Review Request Club]
SCUD14 responds:
thank you for your detailed review, and answering my request. Yes, i did draw using a mouse. Hopefully I can buy a tablet with my christmas money. I see what you mean about the subtitles, they did cut of a bit of the screen.