not bad
Not bad, here's a positive critique. The Art could use a some approving and yeah a quick movie wouldn't be a bad idea. Other than that it was decent. Hope you don't get blamed and if you do, I tried to save you ( i voted well, cause it's not bad for a second video.)
Well I didn't get blammed, but thanks for the save. I was really hoping for the score not to be effected by how many animations I've done before.
Yea, I had to rush the art a little, so my next stuff will probably be better.
Pong haha... what a game!
I don't think I have ever played pong but that was still amusing to be sure. The end bit was clearly the best.
Not too bad
I have a fever,
And the only perscription is more cowbell.
You sir, are now recognized by me as awesome.
LOL
This looks like it will be a hilarious movie. I can't wait until it comes out (if it ever does). The graphics are pretty good but could be better and use shadows. It got me anticipated which Flash movies rarely do to me.
It definitely looks like it will be a funny movie... the voice acting needed a bit of work or either the sound setting was set too low... To fix that go into File>Publish Settings>Flash>Stream settings and set it to 112kbps. That should make the audio quality for audio that has been set to stream higher but unfortunately increases the file size.
Lipsyncing was very good, but you could add a bit more movement into the character that talks like he moves up his microphone so he looks a bit excited... but the main thing about the graphics that needs improving is shadows... you need to add shadows to your graphics.
Good job, can't wait for the movie to come out!
-Review Request Club
Decent working of a trailer
No, it doesn't really remind me of the trailer for a hollywood blockbuster. It's not even a patch on a trailer for a straight-to-dvd movie, but it is certainly a decent parody of it.
The graphics look a little rough around the edges for me. What you really need is just a single line, not about three for the edges of the people.
If you combined that with standing a little further away from the microphone when you recorded, you might just be on to a winning formula here.
Good start though.
[Review Request Club]