Not so bad
u have to read very fast so u can read but if u read u cant see the action thats something not so cool xD also try to make it longer they die too fast n they all died in the same place i think that sucks xD but i liked it ^^
Not so bad
u have to read very fast so u can read but if u read u cant see the action thats something not so cool xD also try to make it longer they die too fast n they all died in the same place i think that sucks xD but i liked it ^^
thanks
Not bad
It has a lot of potential. With a little work it could be alot better IMO. The first three characters were killed off too quickly also.
ok